I am a student at Goldfields Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Dear Kate I like your storyboard about pests. I like how it all makes sense. You have made it clear that the subject is about pests because the sentences are all what pests do.I think that the fence would not keep the pests out. From Brynn.
Dear Kate I like your storyboard about pests. I like how it all makes sense. You have made it clear that the subject is about pests because the sentences are all what pests do.I think that the fence would not keep the pests out. From Brynn.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your pests because it looks really real. I like how you put a peacock in it. What are the men in the last one?. By Rose
the men in the last one is fencing the forests but it might not keep most pests out
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